Lynn Gaertner-Johnston is a business writing trainer. She comes up with these 12 essential rules for e-mails on her blog: Businesswritingblog.com.
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Grab the client in the subject line and opening sentence. Create a reason to open the email and read it.
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Focus on just one purpose in each message. Don’t make the client (or you as the writer) go in different directions.
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Focus on you–not on I, we, or your company. Clients focus on themselves–so should you.
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Describe benefits to your client–not features or deliverables. Excite your client with possibilities.
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Write to this client–not any client or clients. Use his or her name, and be specific in your offer.
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Provide value in each sales communication–don’t just check in or follow up.
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Ask for action. Give the client a clear step to take. If there is nothing to do, your client will delete and forget the message.
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Show the benefits of taking action. What’s in it for the client to renew, buy now, or schedule a meeting with you?
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Communicate positively. For example, don’t change the client’s program–upgrade or enhance it.
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Be concise. Use short, powerful sentences that don’t string readers along.
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Format for easy access to content. Help your clients find information fast.
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Be professional. Follow the rules of business writing.
Read more from her blog here:
http://www.businesswritingblog.com/business_writing/2010/09/essentials-of-emails-that-sell.html